Wypracowanie - angielski

Question

Wypracowanie na 250 słów. Temat to "Dzień z Życia" ale nie człowieka. Może byc jakiegoś przedmiotu, zwierzęcia.

Answer 1

250 słów :)
Oto wypracowanie:

    This day was really hard for me. I am only a little bird. Today I had ran away from hunters and theirs dogs. I am so exhausted.
    In the morning I wake up with my family and fly on the breakfast. We were eating a hundreds of insects. Yummy! I love eating them.
    Then I saw a group of hunters. People are sometimes very bad. But some time ago I remember that a human help me with my broken wing. She was really nice for me. She had blue eyes and blond hair. But… I must end my story now.
    Dogs were impatient. They barking on us. I was so scared… and I was the last bird. Other fled away and hide in hollows. I try to lost hunters and dogs. In one moment I begun fly over the marshland. Chase came to a halt. I survived. I was relieved.
    After that I flew away from that place. I found a wonderful place with any people. Ad also I have missed my family. I am too small to survive next day. I was lost. I know that I must find other bird flock.
    But wait… I hear tweeting from the north. I went there to see who’s that. This was my family! All birds survived. I was very happy. Now I can eat insect with them again!
    This is my story. I hope that people stopped hunting for us. Now I have to sleep… to again wake up and eat insects.

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Mam nadzieję, że pomogłam- jeżeli tak liczę na małego + i/lub najlepszą odpowiedź :).
Pozdrawiam, powodzenia na lekcji :).

Comments

group of hunters*, jeszcze ze 3 błędy, ale nie chce mi się wypisywać.