Napisz pocztówkę do Twoich zagranicznych znajomych.

Question

Zadanie 8. Jesteś na wakacjach. Napisz pocztówkę do Twoich zagranicznych znajomych. Uwzględnij w niej następujące informacje:
 gdzie obecnie przebywasz
 jak spędzasz czas
 co robiłeś/-aś wczoraj
 kiedy kończy się Twój pobyt.
Podpisz się jako XYZ. W zadaniu limit słów nie jest określony.

Answer 1

Hi Tom and Susan,
I am in Egypht with my family. The weather is beautiful. We went do the Egypht two weeks ago.We stay in hotel "Ra". Now I am on the beach. We heave a great time. I and my family play volleybal, swiming in the sea ,sunbatching on the beach and sightseeing very intresting pleace. Yesterday we visited Egypht. We are backing to home tomorrow at nine o clock. Best wishes, yours friend ,Harry

Comments

you made the basic mistakes as person who never had a contact with english language before. The particular steps you should know:
greeting- dear friends, dear sir/ madam
2nd line- present simple
you dont mix verbs in the same line.
My way of writing it
Dear Tom and Susan,
I am in Egypt with my family. We came here two weeks ago. We are staying in a luxurious RA hotel. The weather is beautiful over here. We are have a great time together. Me and my family playing beach volleyball, swimming in the sea, sunbathing on the beach, sightseeing. We are coming back home at 9 o' clock tomorrow.
Best wishes,
Harry